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In Stefter’s Humble Opinion
April, 4th.
Jason Luke at Jonah Noble’s funeral.
The day they buried Jonah Noble was a perfect day to be alive. The sky was a brilliant blue, the summer sun warm through the leafy trees. The flower beds that bordered the cemetery were a riot of reds and yellows.
Jason Luke stood with the milling crowd of mourners on the edges of the grave. There were hundreds of women, each of them dressed in black, each of them sobbing softly, as the priest performed the burial service.
“Here lies Jonah Noble…” the elderly man began in somber tones. The group of bereaved stepped a little closer, flattening the green grass, gathering close together as though to take comfort from each other.
A woman cried, and another followed. The sounds of grief became a soft undulating sound that seemed to hum in the air.
Jason Luke fell to his knees, on the edge of the grave.
For a moment, the crowd fell silent. The elderly priest lost his way, and his voice faltered. He looked down at the author, and reached a kindly hand down to help the man up. Jason Luke shook the man’s hand away violently.
“No!” Jason Luke shook his head. “No. I have to be sure…. I have to be sure the bastard is dead!”
A note from Jason:
Oh, how sweet this was. The suggestion of me attending Jonah Noble’s funeral was simply a temptation I could not possibly resist. I liked this scene… but readers didn’t seem to share my desire to see Jonah dead. It remains one I truly enjoyed writing!
In Stefter’s Humble Opinion
April, 4th.
Jonah finds Tiny leaving the training room.
Tiny came out of the training room like a thief, pulling the door slowly closed behind him. He paused beyond the door, tensed and listening. I stepped in front of him and he flinched in shock.
“What were you doing in there?” I asked mildly. I leaned in the doorway casually. I had my hands in my pockets.
Tiny faltered, then looked acutely embarrassed. “I.. I was wondering what you had in there,” he confessed. “I was trying to figure out what made you so good with women.”
I smiled. “Tiny, no amount of toys will make a man a good lover,” I explained. “Arousing a woman is something that comes from within the man. It’s in his eyes – the smoldering way he looks at her. And it’s in his voice – the confidence and command in his manner. It’s in his hands – the way he turns a touch into a caress… and it’s in his imagination. It’s the way a man kisses, and where he kisses. It’s the sensuality, and the suppressed passion… all those things make a man a lover. They’re things you learn, not objects you can purchase. Making love to a woman is a skill and a craft…”
In Stefter’s Humble Opinion
April, 4th.
First morning waking up together.
I turned my head slowly and studied Leticia’s face. She was laying on her side, facing away from me. She had her cheek cupped in the palm of her hand and I raised myself up onto my elbow and touched at the strands of hair that lay across her brow.
Her eyes were closed, her long delicate lashes interlaced, her breathing deep and peaceful. I traced my finger across the flawless perfection of her skin and her eyes fluttered open, milky grey for an instant. Then she turned her head on the pillow until she was looking into my eyes. A soft loving smile spread across her lips and she made a contented sound in the back of her throat like a purr.
She was naked beneath the sheet. She closed her eyes again and moved her hips. She arched her back like a cat, pushing her pelvis back in silent invitation, and I reached beneath the covers and pulled her towards me. Leticia gave a brief, soft gasp and then we began to rock together slowly, joined beneath the sheet and moving our bodies together in an erotic slow dance.
In Stefter’s Humble Opinion
April, 4th.
Jason Luke and Leticia slow dancing under the stars on a rooftop while Jonah watches.
I felt my blood turn to ice. I felt a soft red mist begin to burn behind my eyes. I stood quietly in the shadows, my fists bunched like hammers… and watched Leticia slow-dancing in the arms of another man.
But not any other man.
It was him. Jason Luke.
I watched the way the couple moved together – the way the man’s hands were wrapped possessively around Leticia’s waist. I watched the way he leaned forward and whispered in her ear, and the melting flirtatious ring of laughter in Leticia’s voice as she stared wide eyes into the man’s face. She was blushing. I saw Jason Luke arch an eyebrow, and an instant later, Leticia nodded. She was blushing.
The song finished, replaced by a loud roar that I could hear in my ears. It was the sound of my rage – the burn of my simmering hatred. I stormed out of the shadows, striding towards the couple.
They jumped apart. Leticia’s face flushed crimson and she lowered her head with a guilty shock. Jason Luke turned as I bore down on him.
“Bastard,” I hissed. “Get ready, Luke. I’m about to tear you apart…!”
Book Boyfriend Reviews
April, 7th.
Leticia finds nude pictures of Caroline.
Leticia picked up one of the last cardboard boxes, and then froze suddenly. She set the box back down and reached inside. In her hands were nude photographs.
Dozens of them.
Silently Leticia went through the photographs, shuffling through them like they were a deck of cards. She studied the images in cold, icy silence, and then slowly turned to me.
She held the photos up in her hand. “Who is this woman?”
“Caroline,” I said simply.
“The Caroline? The woman who lived with you as your submissive for three years?”
I nodded. “Yes,” I said. “I had those photos taken of her by a professional photographer.” My voice was matter-of-fact.
I went to Leticia and stared over her shoulder. “The ones where she is fully nude are my favorites,” I said. “I prefer them to the lingerie shots.”
Leticia’s expression changed, then changed again. I saw a turmoil of emotions play behind her eyes. Finally she said softly, “She looks very beautiful…”
I nodded. “She is,” I said. “But so are you. I’m sure the photos I have taken of you in similar poses will be just as provocative, and delicious.”
Leticia looked up into my eyes with a start of pure fear. “Jonah! I could never…”
I smiled, and took the photos from her stiff fingers. “Yes, you can,” I said. “I’ve already made the booking. The photographer will be here on Wednesday.”
I caught Leticia in my arms as she fainted.
Book Boyfriend Reviews
April, 7th.
Leticia asking Jonah about his mother in the library.
“Your father and you didn’t get along, did you?” Leticia asked softly.
We were standing in the library. I glanced at Leticia, surprised by her question, and then turned my attention back to the rows of paperback titles, trying to find the latest Nicholas Ryan zombie book.
“No,” I said. “The Old Man wanted me to be someone I wasn’t.”
There was a long moment of silence. Leticia took a tentative step closer as though she were trying to reach out to me, connect.
“What about your mother?”
“Which one?” I asked, and there was an edge to my voice that Leticia read as a warning.
“How many mothers did you have?”
I turned to Leticia and sighed. I thrust my hands deep into the pockets of my pants and balanced on the balls of my feet. I caught a glimpse of my reflection in the old mirror on the side wall. My face was grim, my features seemingly carved of granite.
“Four,” I said. “My real mother died when I was young. Then the Old Man started marrying younger women. The last one – the woman he was married to when he died – was the woman you saw me at the hotel with a week or two ago. Remember the mysterious attractive woman who gave me her hotel key – the
