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Chapter 1

The girl had no name.

That was the first thing Maren noticed.Not the bruising along the patient’s collarbone or the dehydration that had turned her lips white.Not the way her fingers clutched the edge of the gurney like she expected someone to drag her off of it.The chart said Jane Doe.No age listed.No emergency contact.No insurance.Just a transfer code Maren had never seen before and a physician’s signature she couldn’t match to anyone on staff.

She pulled the curtain closed behind her and set the chart on the rolling table.

“I’m Maren.I’m your nurse tonight.”She kept her voice low, steady.“Can you tell me your name?”

The girl stared at the ceiling.Her teeth were set so tight Maren could see the muscles working beneath the skin.She was young.Sixteen, maybe seventeen.Hard to tell with the hollows under her cheekbones and the dark circles that made her eyes look like they’d been pressed into her skull.

“That’s okay.You don’t have to talk right now.”Maren reached for the blood pressure cuff.“I’m going to check your vitals.Is it all right if I touch your arm?”

A small nod.

The girl flinched when the cuff tightened.Not a normal flinch—a full-body contraction, bracing for a blow.

Maren didn’t react.She watched the numbers climb on the monitor, noted the elevated heart rate, and documented everything on the tablet.BP 142 over 94.Pulse 112.Respiration rate 22.The numbers told a story the girl wouldn’t.

“Your blood pressure’s a little high,” Maren said.“We’re going to get some fluids in you and run a few tests.Nothing painful.I’ll be here the whole time.”

The girl’s eyes moved to hers for the first time.The look was quick and raw and wordless.Then the girl looked away again, and her fingers tightened on the gurney rail.

Maren stepped out of the bay and pulled the curtain shut.She stood there for three seconds, hand still on the fabric, before she walked to the nurses’ station.

Peg Landry was eating a granola bar and watching the admit board.She’d worked the ICU for twenty-two years and had opinions about everything, which she shared freely whether anyone asked or not.

“Bay four,” Maren said.“Jane Doe.Came in on a sealed transfer about forty minutes ago.Do you know anything about it?”

Peg glanced at the board without much interest.“Night supervisor signed for her.Said it was an overflow from Tampa General.”

“Tampa’s three hours away.”

“I just pass along what they tell me, Ward.”

“There’s no physician on the floor who admitted her.The chart has a signature from a doctor who doesn’t appear to work here.”Maren set the tablet down.“And she’s a minor.Where are her parents?”

Peg stopped chewing.She looked at Maren with twenty-two years of institutional patience.

“You’ve been here, what, two years?”

“Eighteen months.”

“Right.So let me tell you how sealed transfers work.The paperwork comes later.The authorization comes from administration.The attending gets assigned in the morning.In the meantime, you stabilize, you document, and you don’t call Tampa at two a.m.to ask questions they won’t answer.”

“She’s terrified, Peg.”

“She’s in the ER at two in the morning.Everybody’s terrified at two in the morning.”Peg picked up her granola bar.“Do your intake.Get her hydrated.The day shift will sort out the paperwork.”

Maren stood at the counter and stared at the chart on the screen.The transfer code—SPT-7—wasn’t in the system when she searched for it.The physician’s signature resolved to a name she’d never heard: Dr.R.Vasik.No staff listing.No hospital directory entry.No Google results when she typed it into her phone under the counter.

She went back to bay four.

The girl hadn’t moved.Her eyes were open, fixed on the strip of fluorescent light above her bed.The IV Maren had started was dripping steadily.Some of the color had returned to her lips, but the tension in her body hadn’t changed.She lay rigid, perfectly still, like a person who’d learned that stillness was safer than movement.

Maren pulled the stool up beside the bed and sat down.

“I’m going to be honest with you,” she said quietly.“Something about your chart doesn’t look right to me.I’d like to help, but I need you to tell me what’s going on.”