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“Yeah, pretty much. In fact, I think my writing is pretty polished when I have a smaller window of opportunity to get things right.”
“So, how’s the book coming along?” I ask, trying to sound as encouraging as possible.
Susan takes a deep breath. “It’s going well, I think. I just finished a chapter with a pretty spicy scene.”
I raise my eyebrows, intrigued. “Spicy, you say? Well, don’t keep me waiting, read it out loud!”
“Hmmm.”
“Come on, you know I’m a big fan of spicy.”
Susan hesitates, looking at me with a mix of excitement and uncertainty. “Are you sure? I don’t want you to think the characters are based on you guys or anything. I know Ed already warned me about it, and I’ve tried to—”
“Ed was being unreasonable.” I chuckle, feeling the warmth of her concern. “Trust me, Susan, I know the difference between fiction and reality. And besides, even if they are based on us, what’s wrong with that?”
She laughs, shaking her head. “Okay, okay. I’ll read you a section. But just one, okay?”
I nod eagerly, and she begins to read, her voice smooth and confident. As she reads, I can feel the heat rising in my cheeks.
I’m standing here in this dimly lit room, and I can hardly contain my excitement. I’m about to kiss three different men in one night, and I can’t wait to see how each kiss will feel.
I turn to the first man, the vet, and he leans in to kiss me. His lips are soft and gentle, and I can feel the tenderness in his touch. As we part, I take a deep breath and turn to the second man, the ranger.
He pulls me into his arms and kisses me passionately, and I can feel my heart racing in my chest. His touch is strong and confident, and I feel myself getting lost in the moment.
Then I turn to the third man, the paramedic, and his kiss is tender and sweet. I can feel his warmth and kindness in every touch, and I can’t help but smile as we part.
As the three of us continue to kiss, our passion intensifies. The room is filled with the sound of our heavy breathing and the soft moans that escape our lips.
The vet’s hands roam over my body, his touch sending shivers down my spine. The ranger’s hands are rough and calloused, but his touch is just as electrifying. And the paramedic’s touch is gentle, but his kiss is full of longing and desire.
I find myself lost in the moment, lost in the pleasure of each man’s touch. I feel like I’m in a dream, and I never want it to end.
But eventually, we have to come up for air. We break apart, gasping for breath, and stare at each other in awe.
As our kisses grow more heated, the four of us begin to shed each other’s clothes. The room is filled with the sound of fabric rustling and buttons popping as we undress each other with eager hands. The vet’s hands are warm as he slides my dress down my body, exposing my skin to the cool air.
The ranger’s hands are rough and calloused as he tugs at my bra, freeing my breasts from their confines. And the paramedic’s touch is gentle as he helps me step out of my panties.
In turn, I help the men undress, reveling in the feel of their hard, toned bodies under my fingertips. The ranger’s muscles ripple under his skin as I help him out of his shirt, and the paramedic’s body is lean and lithe as I slide his pants down his hips. As we stand before each other, naked and unashamed, I feel a sense of freedom and exhilaration. The chemistry between us is palpable.
As we stand there, naked and exposed, the heat between us becomes almost unbearable. Our bodies press together as we continue to kiss, our hands roaming over each other’s skin with a sense of urgency. The vet’s hands trail down my body, caressing my curves as he leans in to kiss my neck. The ranger’s mouth moves down my chest, teasing my nipples with his tongue.
And the paramedic’s hands grip my hips, pulling me closer as he grinds his hips against mine. I moan softly as the three of them explore my body, their hands and mouths driving me wild with desire. I can feel the heat building between my legs, and I know I’m close to losing control.
I can feel their eyes on me, and I know they’re all thinking the same thing: they want me, all of me. And I want them too. I turn my head and give the ranger a sultry smile, then slide down until I’m at eye level with his cock. I take him in my mouth, teasing him with my tongue as he moans in pleasure.
Suddenly, I feel the vet’s hands on my breasts, his fingers pinching and pulling at my nipples. I gasp in pleasure, then turn my attention to him, kissing him deeply as I continue to pleasure the ranger with my hand. But then the vet’s hand is on my thigh, his fingers inching closer and closer to my pussy. I can feel myself getting wetter and wetter as he touches me, and I know that I’m about to come. The men aren’t far behind me. Their bodies are hard and ready as they press against me, and I can feel the tension building in each of them. As we move together, our bodies writhing in pleasure, I feel like I’m on the edge of a cliff, ready to plunge into the depths of ecstasy. As I explode, I feel all three men around me, their hands and mouths and bodies all intertwined with mine.
And with one final, explosive burst of pleasure, we all tumble over the edge, lost in a haze of pleasure and desire.
The scene is intense, passionate, and incredibly erotic. I can’t help but picture myself in the place of one of the male characters. It’s well written and steamy, and I can feel myself getting a little hot under the collar.
“Wow, that was really good,” I say, fanning myself.
“Really?” she says, her eyes lighting up. “Do you have any constructive criticism to give me?”
“Hmm,” I say, rubbing my chin thoughtfully. “I think some places felt a little rushed.”
